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| Old writing; Do you still like your first fic? | |
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| Topic Started: Wednesday Mar 31 2010, 01:21 PM (375 Views) | |
| MonaLisa | Wednesday Mar 31 2010, 01:21 PM Post #1 |
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So, I came across a mention of Homecoming, my very first fanfic, and decided I should finish the job I started a long time ago - reformatting it after the move, and making sure it was all there. It took me pretty much all day today, partly because I ended up re-reading big chunks of it along the way. Homecoming was written in 2001-2002. For a long time, I've felt that it was clumsily written, compared to what I've done since then. And yeah, some things about it I would definitely have done differently if I'd been writing it now. (I didn't change anything major when checking it today, though, just a bad choice of words here and there. It is what it is, and I wouldn't feel right about changing it.) But I also found myself really liking some parts of it, parts that I'd forgotten I'd written. I was going "Oh, hey, this is pretty good!" more than once. What a pleasant surprise! How do the rest of you feel when you re-read your old stuff? |
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| CanuckDaysfan | Wednesday Mar 31 2010, 11:08 PM Post #2 |
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I tend to cringe a lot when I read certain parts of my early fics, like Schemes and Dreams. It was my very first fic and there a lots of things I would change editing-wise if I went back to it now. I refuse to touch it though, as I feel I should concentrate on my unfinished fics before returning to my finished ones, lol. I'm probably the most proud of my writing in Une Fois Dans Une Vie and A Butterfly Flaps its Wings. When I started both of them, writing still came quite easily to me. It's tougher these days. Fortune's Crook is very hard for me to read. I think I did a really good job with my writing in it, almost too good. It really hits home and I cry whenever I read it. I cry a lot reading other people's work, but it's a different emotion for my writing. I usually do more humourous stuff. I do like to reread my own fics every once in awhile, if for nothing more than a reminder that, yes, I do have the ability to write and just need to get past whatever psychological barrier (or laziness ) is preventing me from doing so.
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| kittykat1885 | Saturday Apr 3 2010, 03:38 AM Post #3 |
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ITA, when I re-read a lot of my older stuff, I have a "Why did I do that?" moment. Basically, most of my older fics suck lol. |
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| Khloe<3 | Saturday Apr 3 2010, 04:01 AM Post #4 |
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Oh my gosh I can't even begin to describe how I feel when rereading my old fics. I'm pretty sure I feel embarrassed more than anything. I was also about 12 when I started writing fan fiction and my old stuff literally makes me cry because it sucks so much lol. I still have all of my old work on my trusty laptop, but I've had it taken down from my website and SC. I only have Betrothed up now, and it's a rewrite of the original because the original was terrible. I've grown a lot since then, but I still think there is room for improvement. |
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| tje8375 | Sunday Apr 4 2010, 02:50 AM Post #5 |
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Norma, thank you for writing Fortune's Crook. I loved the story and loved the way you ended it. For all those who are out there, you should read it, it is well worth your time. And in a PM tell me what you think of the ending. |
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| tje8375 | Sunday Apr 4 2010, 02:53 AM Post #6 |
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Can I ask you to please continue your story in Betrothed. I am so waiting for the next chapter. It was one of the stories I cited in the other thread, fanfics you like. I enjoyed it and want the story to go on. |
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| tje8375 | Sunday Apr 4 2010, 02:59 AM Post #7 |
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And for all those writers who might be embarrassed by their older work, don't feel that way. We readers are thankful that you spent the time to share your story. Your work is an example of how you felt and the effort you put in at the time. One should never second guess their best effort. One should celebrate the attempt to even do it. So many of us don't even put ourselves out there and take a risk. We sit on the sidelines and wish we had. At least you took the journey and shared a part of you with your lumi friends. In my book, this is special. So I say, "Thank You!"
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| Khloe<3 | Sunday Apr 4 2010, 04:42 AM Post #8 |
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Of course I hope to have an update up soon. I was stumped for the last few weeks on which way to make the story go, but I'm pretty sure I have it figured out now I have about 2 1/2 pages of chapter four done
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| Khloe<3 | Sunday Apr 4 2010, 04:42 AM Post #9 |
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thank you that was very inspirational
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| MonaLisa | Sunday Apr 4 2010, 02:32 PM Post #10 |
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I appreciate what you're saying, but... This is a board specifically intended for writers to talk about writing. Everybody sometimes feels that what they've written is less than perfect. If we can't talk frankly about that here, then where? Acknowledging that there's room for improvement isn't a bad thing. Saying that your writing is better now than it was some years ago definitely isn't a bad thing. Encouragement is always welcome - but it shouldn't mean there's no room to talk about things that could be better. We all have those. Sharing and discussing them with others is a very useful part of the creative process. |
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| CanuckDaysfan | Sunday Apr 4 2010, 05:02 PM Post #11 |
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I disagree. You're seem to be making an assumption that all authors always put in their best effort. I know from my own experiences that that's simply not always the case ![]() Sometimes we get lazy and we post stuff knowing full well that it's not our best work. As Felicia already mentioned, this specific board is for discussing the writing process, so let's keep the "everything is always positive" gushing to a minimum. I have no trouble with my writing being critiqued. I wouldn't post it in an open forum if I did. |
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| CanuckDaysfan | Sunday Apr 4 2010, 05:04 PM Post #12 |
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I'm glad you liked it, but why are you afraid to discuss the ending in public? As the author, I'd love to hear what people thought of it, good and bad. Of course, the place for a thread like that is the feedback board, not this one, but feel free to start a discussion if you wish. |
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| Amanda | Sunday Apr 4 2010, 06:17 PM Post #13 |
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Love this post. I totally despise my older stuff and even though I have the best intentions to finish it - like Winds of Change, Baby Love, and esp Heavens Arms, I find that it's very hard for me to continue a story that is so poorly written in my own eyes or stylistically different from what I do now. Winds was actually started in 2000-2001 too. I find myself taking time to write on much new things when I do find time to do so - like I did today. I guess no one likes too much of their own old stuff:) I do find when I read over an old fic that I end up editing it even if no one else sees it. One of my quirks.
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But I miss screaming and fighting and kissing in the rain. And it's 2am and I'm cursing your name. You're so in love that you act insane. And that's the way I loved you. Breakin' down and coming undone. It's a roller coaster kinda rush. And I never knew I could feel that much. And that's the way I loved you. | |
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| LumiForever | Thursday Apr 8 2010, 12:10 PM Post #14 |
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I just can't read my first fan fic it was for Star Wars and is not readable there are so many spelling and gramer errors. And yet people liked it how I don't know. |
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| Khloe<3 | Thursday Apr 22 2010, 03:25 PM Post #15 |
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I feel the exact same way about all of my old stuff. I had a piece called "For love or money" that I read over last night bc I'm thinking of rewriting it (kinda like how I am doing with Betrothed) and I was like "Man people actually read this!? and LIKED it?!" Haha It had so many grammar and spelling mistakes it was difficult for me to read it! |
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| Medea | Sunday Apr 25 2010, 09:41 AM Post #16 |
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My first fic was called Willpower, and yes, it's still here and basically unchanged. Even though I know it isn't very good, that doesn't bother me, possibly because I wasn't aiming for "good" when I wrote it. I wrote it because I wanted there to be Lumi fic out there, to show anyone who was reading that there were people out there who wanted Lumi. It's unusual for me to love a fic I write as I'm writing it, so there's no element of "still" liking; I probably never liked it to begin with. I did like a Harry Potter fic I wrote around the same time as Willpower... and that one humiliates me now, but I can't get it off the 'net because it was archived in lots of places and I didn't even keep track of where it went. Once in a while I still get an email from someone telling me she loved it and I'm tempted to ask WHY? |
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I hope to have an update up soon. I was stumped for the last few weeks on which way to make the story go, but I'm pretty sure I have it figured out now 
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